Wednesday, July 26, 2006

Loneliness



Sometimes so lonely at heart
When with loved ones we part
They move so far apart
It gets difficult to make a fresh start

Each tree I lean on breaks
And with it heart shatters and shakes
My soul trembles and quakes
When all around high are the stakes
A tiny blow is all it takes
To make life seem full of only fakes

10 comments:

Tapasya said...

That is my kinda poetry! Lol. When did you turn negative and sad and pessimistic?

Tapasya said...
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Tapasya said...

Hi again! I was going through my own blog space, and I realised that you havent commented on so many posts of mine! Thats unfair yaar!

Sankalp Parihar said...

Well y do all seniors hafta turn poetic ;)

nevertheless...a good one!

aditi said...

[reply taps]
hey everyone feels that way sometimes.....but i didnt find it pessimistic somehow just sad.usually i start a pessimistic poem and then give a happy end but this time didnt feel like it!!!

aditi said...

[reply sankalp]

hey!!!why can't seniors write poetry?oris that the birth-right of juniors??lol

vikas said...

Really good lines

aditi said...

[reply vikas]
thanx

Ankur jain said...

Nice to read but a bit depressing because it thats the truth even small things done by someone close hurts so much that we start beliving it's all over ...

aditi said...

[reply]ankur
I guess it hurts a lot as we depend a lot on people close to us.
And then we have a meaningful conversation with some"sensible" people and everything becomes ok again!