Sometimes so lonely at heart
When with loved ones we part
They move so far apart
It gets difficult to make a fresh start
Each tree I lean on breaks
And with it heart shatters and shakes
My soul trembles and quakes
When all around high are the stakes
A tiny blow is all it takes
To make life seem full of only fakes
8 comments:
That is my kinda poetry! Lol. When did you turn negative and sad and pessimistic?
Hi again! I was going through my own blog space, and I realised that you havent commented on so many posts of mine! Thats unfair yaar!
[reply taps]
hey everyone feels that way sometimes.....but i didnt find it pessimistic somehow just sad.usually i start a pessimistic poem and then give a happy end but this time didnt feel like it!!!
[reply sankalp]
hey!!!why can't seniors write poetry?oris that the birth-right of juniors??lol
[reply vikas]
thanx
Nice to read but a bit depressing because it thats the truth even small things done by someone close hurts so much that we start beliving it's all over ...
[reply]ankur
I guess it hurts a lot as we depend a lot on people close to us.
And then we have a meaningful conversation with some"sensible" people and everything becomes ok again!
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