Wednesday, July 26, 2006

Loneliness



Sometimes so lonely at heart
When with loved ones we part
They move so far apart
It gets difficult to make a fresh start

Each tree I lean on breaks
And with it heart shatters and shakes
My soul trembles and quakes
When all around high are the stakes
A tiny blow is all it takes
To make life seem full of only fakes
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8 comments:

  1. TapasyaSunday, August 06, 2006 10:25:00 AM

    That is my kinda poetry! Lol. When did you turn negative and sad and pessimistic?

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  2. TapasyaSunday, August 06, 2006 10:33:00 AM

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  3. TapasyaSunday, August 06, 2006 10:34:00 AM

    Hi again! I was going through my own blog space, and I realised that you havent commented on so many posts of mine! Thats unfair yaar!

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  4. aditiSaturday, August 19, 2006 3:13:00 PM

    [reply taps]
    hey everyone feels that way sometimes.....but i didnt find it pessimistic somehow just sad.usually i start a pessimistic poem and then give a happy end but this time didnt feel like it!!!

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  5. aditiSaturday, August 19, 2006 3:15:00 PM

    [reply sankalp]

    hey!!!why can't seniors write poetry?oris that the birth-right of juniors??lol

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  6. aditiSunday, September 24, 2006 2:08:00 AM

    [reply vikas]
    thanx

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  7. AnonymousWednesday, October 25, 2006 5:44:00 PM

    Nice to read but a bit depressing because it thats the truth even small things done by someone close hurts so much that we start beliving it's all over ...

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  8. aditiWednesday, October 25, 2006 8:05:00 PM

    [reply]ankur
    I guess it hurts a lot as we depend a lot on people close to us.
    And then we have a meaningful conversation with some"sensible" people and everything becomes ok again!

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